Thursday, July 21, 2011



Oh air !
I want to share,
Just spare.
You gear,
Around the sphere.
I stare how you care,
All the living pair.
You are found,
All around.
Without you there is no sound
You are precious than pound !!!


2 comments:

  1. Hei mrina give some title to your verses so that it ll add beauty to your verse..... This verse is really superb and i ve a doubt in it that is in the third line wat is that i want to share just spare you gear .............................

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  2. mmmmm thank u :-) Spare means - 'afford to give'. Here the little girl wants to share, so she asks the air to spend sometime with her.
    The next line is just an adjective, addressing air...!

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